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Disappointment and Amazement.. by ~ShadowedDream:iconShadowedDream:



Disappointment:
- Looks like: a little girl's lost teddy bear *
- Tastes like: a million regrets
- Feels like: a shower of nails
- Sounds like: a closing door
- Smells like: charcoal smoke, stinging and burning

Amazement:
- Looks like: a baby's first smile
- Tastes like: a deep breath of fresh air
- Feels like: a new friend
- Sounds like: unrestrained laughter
- Smells like: electricity and rain



*Disappointment looks like a little girl's lost teddy bear.  

The teddy bear, lost behind a bed, listening to the family search for it, looking everywhere else except for where he is.  The fear of never being found, of life continuing on without him.  And everyone eventually forgetting he ever existed.  THe fear of being forgotten, of not being wanted or needed, a fear that we find in all of us.  A seedling left out in the wind.  Hidden behind the bed, years of dust caked in his fur, the sound of life passing on all around him while he lies stuck just beyond sight.  Sounds like laughter of the little girl, laughter he cannot share or did not cause.  Finally, moving day, sunlight!  Fresh air!  A squeal of surprise, warm hands, a loving hug.  Found again!  Loved again.
:iconshadoweddream:

Author's Comments

This was a songwriting exercise that I absolutely love. We had a sheet that said:
Disappointment
looks like
tastes like
feels like
sounds like
smells like

Amazement
looks like
tastes like
feels like
sounds like
smells like

And we took a few minutes to filled in the blanks. These were my responses. Then we all read them aloud, and we voted on which one we like the best. We took those phrases, and wrote constantly for 3 minutes straight. The lower part is what I came up with. Eventually, it will be a song...

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:iconmiss-muphet333:
looks like a fun exerscise
:iconshadoweddream:
It really is! And you get the neatest answers, too.

--
Ianto: You know, I still have that stopwatch.
Jack: So?
Ianto: There are a lot of things you can do with a stopwatch...
:iconpixi-in-a-sugar-bowl:
I love this Caiti! I can't wait to hear it as a song!!
:iconshadoweddream:
Thanks! It really was fun, and I think it'll be neat to see how it turns out...

--
Ianto: You know, I still have that stopwatch.
Jack: So?
Ianto: There are a lot of things you can do with a stopwatch...

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